Being a fan of Epic style music myself its good, the end how ever ended like it fell down a cliff.
That said i assume your not finished yet with this work.
The start is nice and calm and it slowly builds up.
I like how the melody at 1.05 kicks in which makes it very nice. then stops a bit and continues.
If this is not finished i hope you finish it if it is i hope you make a extended version of it.